They had a race. One cars colour- was red, another ones was blue.
And the red colour car won. Then they went to a beach. They had lot of fun. Then they went to see a movie. It was boring. One day they had a fight.
Both got hurt. Then they said to each ather sorry.
Then they had lot of fun.
by Pavan Abhinav
(almost nine)
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3 comments:
Reminded me of the stories my brother used to write, full of people taking Thums Up breaks.
Loved it.
awwwww :). Another story teller in the making. Children see things in such simple light...and then there is a solution, and such a simple one at that, to everything! A big high five to the almost nine year old gentleman.
I loved the simplicity of this story. I could actually imagine both the cars living together as man and wife. Sometimes the simplest of things add so much meaning to words. Great going! Keep it up :)
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